I'd like to offer up an edit, before doing it so as to not piss people off. Specifically this bit, " There is literally nothing that can surprise him on the battlefield, no stratagem he has not already analyzed and countered, short of human ingenuity."
Now that maybe true, but it sounds pretty reminiscent of Matttard fluff. "Ultramrines are so awesome and powerful, they can't be stopped. They know everything on teh subject of battle and doesn't afraid of anything. Hurr Durr." Perhaps wording it differently, so that he comes off as powerful but defeatable? Munch munch 02:29, 31 May 2011 (UTC)