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While descending onto the roof of fort an errant bolt skewered through her arm and ruined her shoulder, causing her to free fall onto the battlements below, with the resulting impact crippling a leg. To add insult to injury, a half-dozen militiamen surrounded her and one attempted to run her through with a spear but it's point only got her right eye. Unable to flee or fight, she yanked her eye from it's socket and ate it right off of the spear tip. The show of bravado had paid off and they retreated, but as Zinaida lay bleeding in the snow she wondered if it would've been better to have just died.
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While descending onto the roof of fort an errant bolt skewered through her arm and ruined her shoulder, causing her to free fall onto the battlements below, with the resulting impact crippling a leg. To add insult to injury, a half-dozen militaman surrounded her and one attempted to run her through with a spear but it's point only got her right eye. Unable to flee or fight, she yanked her eye from it's socket and ate it right off of the spear tip. The show of bravado had paid off and they retreated, but as Zinaida lay bleeding in the snow she wondered if it would've been better to have just died.
  
 
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