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After a moment of thought, Kor’sarro replied to Kurogane – “Stand up. Where do they keep your daughter?”
 
After a moment of thought, Kor’sarro replied to Kurogane – “Stand up. Where do they keep your daughter?”
 
Kurogane was caught a sudden with the question – “You.” – he struggled with an answer – “After all of this. After what I and the Cult did to you...You would...?”
 
  
 
“Come on. Now that I know everything, let’s rescue both my brothers and your girl.”
 
“Come on. Now that I know everything, let’s rescue both my brothers and your girl.”

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