Talk:"If only."

Original Thread Here: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/17187330/

hello, writefag author, hope you get this message. gonna tidy up the spelling/grammar errors in your story for you out of appreciation for your writing it. the world could always do with moar 40K fiction. i won't be editing for plot or anything, i will just fix errors, but if for any reason you dislike that please feel free to revert. cheers - anon

ps. i also did some very minor style edits, like where some sentences were missing a word or would make more sense with a small change. i feel like it's worth doing this if a story is any good. again if this is offensive, feel free to revert, i just like to practice my editing and help fellow anons with their writefaggotry like they help me with mine. i liked your plot, and the theme in general, and i liked your protagonist as well. he's a decently crafted, relatable character imo. keep going! - same anon

Haha, that was the same kind of book he picked up that twisted his mind before he got to read it, wasn't it? --03:19, 28 August 2016 (UTC)