Talk:Black Locks

From 1d4chan

This is a completely new page for The Black Locks. Finally I've updated their page and fluffed them out properly thanks to the things many anons suggested in the threads that were made in the past. I added some of the things I did. The point is that some people called them Space Wolves 2.0. I on the other hand wanted them to be not exactly like this, but overall distinct from other Chapters. Hope you like this extreme change. I'll be still working on them. On the other hand, if anyone's interested, you can help with further fluffing them out. Even go so far as writing stories about them. And if it goes for the things I did, then I'll change them a little later in order to eliminate repeatings and grammatical errors. And Merry Christmas to you all people. - Ben (talk) 16:30, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

Finally managed to update the page. Found some time to refurbish what I've wrote down some time ago. Hoping that you'll find it good. If ya have any objections or things you'd like me to change in it, then post it in the discussion page titled "Comments on the topic". - Ben (talk) 14:15, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

Comments on the Topic[edit]

Here you can post your thoughts and such on the Black Locks and how to improve them to fit in without losing their distinctive elements. - Ben (talk) 14:16, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

  • A fair amount of writefaggotry. Unfortunately, like the wolves, they fall prey to overuse of one of their aspects. --Taumanta (talk) 11:39, 18 January 2017 (UTC)
  • The pirate part? Sadly yeah. Needs more work on them and these days I didn't find time to further flesh them out.
I was doing a story on them how they act when not in battle and how they interact with people. Maybe this year I can find some time to finish it. - Ben (talk) 12:45, 18 January 2017 (UTC)