Talk:Sand Keepers

Comments from critical anon

Not sure entirely how this legion got made without any defined tactics but thats a glaring omission

Shotel

Had to look this up. It's cool.

Divination

As I understand it the emperor has to rely on a deck of cards to divine the future yet this legion can do that in their mind on a normal day?

It raises so many unanswered questions. Like how exactly they dont fall to tzeentch, or how they dont see the fall of Uriel and Aubrey and Hektor, or how they dont predict of foresee how any of the battles are going to go.

Ultimately Im not sure if I think its marysue/snowflaek thing or mostly okay. I think the problem stems from it being something that should have got tzeentchs attention but they somehow manage to remain loyal and completely untouched by chaos. It seems off you know? Being Magnus but not falling is a kinda cool if predictable twist for an expy, but having it be effortless is just snowflaek and mary sue. It NEEDS development

The Immortal

"instantly teleport them into space" thing though, that is just silly. Otherwise the Immortals is a cool concept with all that shit about inheriting the deeds of the warrior before them etc. Expand on that please

zealous, undying followers of the Emperor and His Will

Good to see someone going down that route but it isn't really developed at the moment. You should expand on it more and tie it in more with the persian/arabic culture stuff going on

Iscander

Given all the greek/russian/macedonian stuff going on I recommend changing that to a more persian name for consistency to the legions theme

They have a long history to explore without retreading the same old greek/roman themes that are a bit tired now despite their reliability

Copy-and-pasted from thread for your reference