Talk:Tranch warfare for a noble

That's how you should treat your nobles. - Ben (talk) 20:18, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

Writer status

There will most likely be much writing of poor quality coming, due to my mental situation. I would be glad for any feedback from any readers so that I can improve.

It ain't bad. Also there will be a Commissar, right? - Ben (talk) 20:54, 24 April 2015 (UTC)

As far as I have planned it, no Commissars. But that may change: I am not yet sure myself where I want to take this story and what kind of characters I create later on. So let me know if you would like this to be of some specific kind of story: The options I have relatively planned out are: War story, horror or love-can-bloom-random-dawg-writing-edition. Last of which would most likely fail, but I AM willing to try depending on the feedback. Additionally, due to me writing late evening (GMT +2)and being relatively noob-ish, I make spelling mistakes and sentences that make no sense. Feel free to fix those or notify me of them if you can bother.

Still will be waiting for more. Keep the good job here. - Ben (talk) 21:59, 26 April 2015 (UTC)

The plot thickens... - Ben (talk) 14:37, 5 May 2015 (UTC)

Only now I realize how short these "chapters" are. Might combine them later. Consider them the results of relatively short brainstorming each. Other option is lengthening them with descriptions and minor events, if I get enough ideas.

Due to me being dumbass who can't even find answers in a more convenient ways, 3 questions: 1. How do I make the "signature" (do I just write that user:username thing with those marks around it or is there a button that does it)? 2. How to shove my contributions to a fitting category? Or do administrators do that? And 3. How do I start a thread?

1. You have to do ~ four times. 2. You need to add the Category: Insert Category name and add a [[ ]] (like:). 3. As in a thread on /tg/? You go there, click start new thread, insert an image (also add a subject as optional) and voila. Or look up on the main page in the FAQ. Also Marines Malevolent...man MC has it hard. - Ben (talk) 21:38, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll be writing again this evening when I have more time. Jake0819 (talk) 15:00, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

Love Can Bloom for a Noble? - Ben (talk) 19:53, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

Maybe. I have sown the seeds for that, although my (very) limited understanding of that feeling and following thought patterns make me hesitate. Now I feel like I'm a friggin' tech-priest... Jake0819 (talk) 12:32, 13 May 2015 (UTC)

This is it. I leave the story open to be expanded upon by better writefags, or to be forgotten and/or deleted. It was fun to write this story, as bad as it is, and I hope you found it entertaining. Until I have new, better ideas for this story or another, farewell. Jake0819 (talk) 20:13, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

Comments and suggestions section

Decided to put this as a separate subject. My entire point in writing is to entertain, and as I am new, I would love to know what readers think: Good AND bad. Additionally, as I do not have a pre-made script, I more than gladly accept suggestions of how to make the story better, within certain limits, of course. The story will still go to a certain direction, but the events may change. Lastly, for my own comment: This story is HEAVILY inspired by FantasyFlight Games' Dark Heresy RPG, as evident by the setting being Calixis sector, with Tranch and Dusk both being also taken directly from Dark Heresy canon. The story will make lots of references to some of the (in my opinion) most epic parts of Dark Heresy lore. Jake0819 (talk) 18:38, 14 May 2015 (UTC)